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The Mystic Rose's avatar

Yes! Thank you! That's exactly what poetry is!

Write To Your Face's avatar

I don't know which is better--the poem itself or hearing you recite it. I think I'm gonna have to say both! This is such a beautiful way to express the beauty of poetry. And I love how you included God into your piece (Who is the greatest artist of all!).

One of my favorite parts was "how He strung the stars among the skies

opened the clouds

the way He cracked the waves and breathed forth the earth."

Not only is this a vivid use of imagery, but it's a true reminder of how everything God created was done with careful decision. He's a God that truly pays attention to detail!

Thank you for sharing. You definitely have a way with words.

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